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Wednesday, May 18, 2016

Tess'a Hiwi the Kiwi Story

2 comments:

  1. Hi Tess
    I love the story, I love how they get stranded.It reminds me a bit of Pinocchio, when he gets swallowed up by the whale. Remember that every time you make someone say something, it is on a new line.
    Freya

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  2. Great story and I love your descriptive use of language. Remember Q is always followed by a U (quickly not qwickly!) Love your writing, hugs Mum X

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